The Definition Of Fitting In

The Definition Of Fitting In

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Sidca By greenrockerchicday Updated Jun 12, 2012

Bailey was always a bad kid. I'm talking about since birth. And one day the judge makes a decision that might change the meaning life has on her. She has to move in with a middle class family with two teens, or go to juvy. I think we know the decision she made. And now living with this family, she needs to learn how to be a "perfect" child or juvy she goes. But as she grows closer to this family, will she actually find a group of people that care for her?

EnvyinEloquence EnvyinEloquence Feb 25, 2011
It's okay so far, but one thing that i noticed is a conventions error. With a dialogue, everytime the speaker changes, you have to start a new paragraph, even if that means that it is a one line paragraph. good luck in ur writings, and i encourage you to check out some of mine!
Sazzlekolt Sazzlekolt Feb 24, 2011
Omg I LOVE this prologue , can't wait till the first chapter :)