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17 Broken Rules

17 Broken Rules

1.1K Reads 23 Votes 2 Part Story
imobsessedwithducks By imobsessedwithducks Updated Feb 26, 2011

17 year old Nate is done with being a "loner". He decided to go to extremes but starts small. A rule is broken each day and where does he end up? Well read and see :) 

Please read and tell me what you think. I want to know if its a good start before I go on :) thanks :)

TKAnez TKAnez Mar 18, 2011
I like this so far~ Nate has a very strong voice that comes out in the narrative. Good job, I voted :)
FlowerofHope FlowerofHope Feb 27, 2011
It's pretty good I like it:) *VOTED*
                              
                                                           -FlowerofHope-
imobsessedwithducks imobsessedwithducks Feb 27, 2011
Im still working on flowering up the words :) rofl i think almost all girls are horomone crazed :) including me cause in my head he is pretty hot ;) Thanks for the read :D 
imobsessedwithducks imobsessedwithducks Feb 26, 2011
@Shadows_of_the_Moon  Haha thanks... I do know its a little choppy but its alright i tried to make as many adjustements as i could. 
                              
                              Why would I care about getting my homework done for ms greene? 
imobsessedwithducks imobsessedwithducks Feb 26, 2011
@xWinglessx  Thanks I probably will have another chapter up tomorrow :) 
                              
xWinglessx xWinglessx Feb 25, 2011
You should continue writing this cause im loving the plot :)