Tears of Avalon

Tears of Avalon

455 Reads 92 Votes 9 Part Story
Erin Casey By erincasey09 Updated Jul 29

Ilyia has spent her entire life living far away from her fairy brethren. This doesn't stop her from finding her own kind of trouble, however. When a handsome lightning fairy named Taren enters her world, she learns of a great darkness spreading its tendrils across Medira. Worse, the dark fairy, Lord Merwellian, is after her and her tears of healing.  After her mother is taken hostage, Ilyia has to join together with Taren to save her mother, and Medira, from certain doom. 

This is a continuation of the short story "Gossamer": https://www.wattpad.com/story/142044357-gossamer

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I've got a good sense of who they are and what they do. You've done a good job of making them likeable without making them too much like Disney characters.
I wonder if it has something to do with the different wings?
She doesn't even have to speak. That is a mom I wouldn't want to anger.
This is so beautiful! I feel like this will be a mother daughter story, which I just love.
This just got interesting! Why is her mother trying to protect her?
wingedoak wingedoak Aug 12
Lovely opening! I have just one small suggestion of eliminating the word "was" from the 2nd sentence and instead saying "warm wind".