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The Devil's Belonging book one

The Devil's Belonging book one

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Marthy By marthe3103 Completed

‘’ let’s head back to the council. Let everyone know what happens with people trying to gather and steal the talismans from us ever again.’’ The boss said angrily and his eyes swept the room. 

‘’ let the mundane police figure this one out.’’ He said and they were gone. A chocked scream escaped my lips and I fell to the ground. Blood immediately soaked my jeans. 

The girl was silently crying and trying to crawl to her mother, her father was too far away. I grabbed for the girl but my hands went right through her. My eyes caught a look at my left hand, I was still holding the toy.

InternalNightmare InternalNightmare Aug 21, 2016
This sounds like me except my eyes are blue/green/grey and I dyed my hair blue.. Soo eh
HelenDark1 HelenDark1 Apr 23, 2016
Sorry, my bad. 😂 I laughed too hard - That song got me good.
Kiran-S Kiran-S Apr 07, 2016
She was blond before. She should join the school with a new name and as a new student.
ZaniahDouglas ZaniahDouglas Mar 13, 2016
Like I just noticed her name but it's spelled like ciels from black butler
wonderland500 wonderland500 Jun 04, 2015
lol I don't know why but when when Brandon said after I laugh e led
Kirbyx Kirbyx Feb 16, 2011
Yep, only grammar and spelling. You have a knack for writing exciting stuff, but it's all muddled from the words put together.  Great chapter =)