Who Have I Become? || ✔

Who Have I Become? || ✔

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🌼 K A T E 🌼 By KB_Champion Completed

When the last fifteen years of your life just up and leaves, what does that leave you with?
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Winner of @Chicklit Weekly Prompt #15
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Mid-Year Awards 2018 Short Story Runner Up
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Winner of @earnestycommunity's Weekly Contest #22 (Goodbyes)

  • breakup
  • chicklit
  • divorce
  • generalfiction
  • heartbreak
  • innerstrength
  • loss
  • loveless
  • memories
  • newbeginnings
  • newstory
  • sad
  • separation
  • startingagain
  • startingfresh
  • tears
  • willowawards
  • wklyprompt
WriterLDR WriterLDR Apr 10, 2018
It was wonderful! The build up to the mirror was great, I really loved how you described every important memory of him over the past fifteen years so we could really imagine what the protagonist is feeling.
BeautifulPari BeautifulPari May 01, 2018
As a married girl, I can not only understand but feel each and every word written here. Its so deep and touching. Beautifully written. Keep it up dear author! :)
kemorgan65 kemorgan65 Oct 11, 2018
Or perhaps 'who will I become?' Because she is still in flux. She has not reached the result yet, having a long way to go to pick up the pieces.
SageMarsden SageMarsden Oct 09, 2018
The Is at the beginning are a little annoying. It’s a little bit repetitive. But it makes me want to know more. Who is this girl, and what did she do? I’m sure you’ll become a better writer as time goes on
TheDEsnow TheDEsnow Oct 08, 2018
The writing lacks soul, but that’s easily fixable because you did a good job here.
TheDEsnow TheDEsnow Oct 08, 2018
Almost all of the paragraphs start with “I”
                              It kinda gets distracting the more I see it