Who Have I Become? || ✔

Who Have I Become? || ✔

3.5K Reads 264 Votes 4 Part Story
K.B. Champion By KB_Champion Completed

When the last fifteen years of your life just up and leaves, what does that leave you with?
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Winner of @Chicklit Weekly Prompt #15
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Mid-Year Awards 2018 Short Story Runner Up
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Winner of @earnestycommunity's Weekly Contest #22 (Goodbyes)

  • breakup
  • chicklit
  • divorce
  • generalfiction
  • heartbreak
  • innerstrength
  • loss
  • loveless
  • memories
  • newbeginnings
  • newstory
  • sad
  • separation
  • startingagain
  • startingfresh
  • tears
  • willowawards
  • wklyprompt
WriterLDR WriterLDR Apr 10
It was wonderful! The build up to the mirror was great, I really loved how you described every important memory of him over the past fifteen years so we could really imagine what the protagonist is feeling.
As a married girl, I can not only understand but feel each and every word written here. Its so deep and touching. Beautifully written. Keep it up dear author! :)
kemorgan65 kemorgan65 Oct 11
Or perhaps 'who will I become?' Because she is still in flux. She has not reached the result yet, having a long way to go to pick up the pieces.
SageMarsden SageMarsden Oct 09
The Is at the beginning are a little annoying. It’s a little bit repetitive. But it makes me want to know more. Who is this girl, and what did she do? I’m sure you’ll become a better writer as time goes on
TheDEsnow TheDEsnow Oct 08
The writing lacks soul, but that’s easily fixable because you did a good job here.
TheDEsnow TheDEsnow Oct 08
Almost all of the paragraphs start with “I”
                              It kinda gets distracting the more I see it