The Love Game

The Love Game

798 Reads 10 Votes 9 Part Story
Shantasia Or Tay By crazy_writer123 Updated Apr 11, 2012

Alice is the new girl in town and on her first day she challenges Mike to win her over before someone else does and to prove he's not full of himself just like the rest of the students at their school. Will Alice stand her ground and avoid Mike at all cost... or will some things from their past bring them closer then ever? There's jealousy, love and lots more along the way.

crazy_writer123 crazy_writer123 Apr 14, 2012
@AddictedBaker yes I'm like a whole year late just wanted to say thanks for saying something. Not many people do.
AddictedBaker AddictedBaker Jul 15, 2011
This is good. But you don't have to put down literally everything she does or thinks cuz we readers need to be able to use our imagination a bit. This is good 4 a first attempt. With a bit more work and editing out the mistakes, this could get really good!
                              Hope I could help!
janae_alexis janae_alexis Feb 28, 2011
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