The Vampire's Slave

The Vampire's Slave

10 Part Story 229K Reads 3K Votes
Rory By fanclub Completed

Witch, Raped, Captured, tortured, Slave, Master, Rojal, Love, Vampire

runawayshadow6 runawayshadow6 Nov 15, 2015 02:22AM
The sad thing is pretty gross I understand the abusivness and stuff but sex with her dad is kinda to far
1amXthoughts 1amXthoughts Sep 15, 2015 11:45PM
I think you got it wrong * crosses out the You and writes an i *   there know he shall sleep in that hell of an underbed?
Umm I be like fine because I'm friends with the monsters under that bed along with the voices inside of my head!
Poor girl! I know exactly how she feels about what her father did to her sexually because I was sexually molested as a teenager. Your choice of words to descrive everything is perfect.
CuteReaper CuteReaper Mar 15, 2012 03:28AM
There are quite a lot of grammatical and spelling errors. Perhaps you should proof read your work before posting.
softgold softgold Oct 02, 2011 03:45AM
While I am going to enjoy this story I think, I do want to ask, is English your first language, no offence but I kind of get the feeling it isn't.