Witch, Raped, Captured, tortured, Slave, Master, Rojal, Love, Vampire
We stopped looking for the monsters under are beds when we realized that they are in are heads
The sad thing is pretty gross I understand the abusivness and stuff but sex with her dad is kinda to far
I think you got it wrong * crosses out the You and writes an i * there know he shall sleep in that hell of an underbed?
Poor girl! I know exactly how she feels about what her father did to her sexually because I was sexually molested as a teenager. Your choice of words to descrive everything is perfect.
There are quite a lot of grammatical and spelling errors. Perhaps you should proof read your work before posting.
While I am going to enjoy this story I think, I do want to ask, is English your first language, no offence but I kind of get the feeling it isn't.