Elementals

Elementals

86.4K Reads 3.4K Votes 40 Part Story
Katrine By RocketMason Completed

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In the year of 3204, the people on Earth are at war with aliens from Mars, human-alike beings with supernatural powers. Over the last thousand years however, humans have evolved. Each human now possesses one of the four elements of nature: fire, water, air, earth - earning the name Elemental. To learn how to control the element, they go through training academies, to among other things find their elemental partner.

Here's where we meet Breeze, a Junior-Elemental controlling the element of air, still struggling with putting his right emotions when connecting to the element. Taunted by his older brother Rain, and his Elemental partner Ember, the insecurity within takes control of his element. That is until he meets the female and rebel-ish kind of Junior Elemental, Blaze.

Achievements:
- Best rank in Science Fiction: #70 (7/1-15)

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  • betrayal
  • blaze
  • breeze
  • earth
  • elemental
  • elements
  • fantasy
  • fiction
  • fire
  • humans
  • mars
  • martians
  • original
  • powers
  • sci-fi
  • sciencefiction
  • spacetravel
  • supernatural
  • water
Chenoa123Kellogg Chenoa123Kellogg Apr 11, 2016
I love this first chapter the cover is what caught my eye and I'm happy it did
ed2wfu ed2wfu Nov 21, 2015
This was great! I'm only on the first part and I like it. I found myself living the story in my mind's eye. Have my vote, you deserve it!
imaxfakemon imaxfakemon Mar 09, 2015
I personally want the hidden element to be nature. So she/ he could grow plants vines or extra to slave world hunger or make oxygen any were.
a-k-a-anonymous a-k-a-anonymous Feb 15, 2015
I really liked the opening and the concept is very interesting.
-celestial- -celestial- Dec 02, 2014
hey, just started reading this. really well written, good job!
RocketMason RocketMason Aug 20, 2014
@Zigzagsgirl716 Gosh, thank you do much! I'm so glad you enjoy it. I have three chapters out, the fourth is pretty much ready to go, and people are already breaking my past records! Thank you so much!