Blade Acolyte

Blade Acolyte

1.1K Reads 18 Votes 9 Part Story
FrozenFortitude By FrozenFortitude Updated Sep 13, 2013

Heith is just fourteen when his family is murdered, and is brought under the wing of a infamous girl, Haeri in his quest to get stronger. He will eventually learn that there is more to being stronger than his sword mastery. His secrets come to light as the identity of his hated are revealed, and it wasn't who he expected. How Heith will cope is left in his hands, but things swerve out of hand when love blossoms from an unexpected place.

Arintez Arintez Feb 26, 2011
Great vivid descriptions-check
                              Awesome action scenes-check
                              Promise of epic story-check
                              New fan-CHECK
                              
                              
                              
                              This is awesome! Wow I'm so psyched to read more!! You're a great writer.
Zanintia725 Zanintia725 Feb 26, 2011
Hmm...this is interesting. You describe things very well, and the gore was fantastic! Gory, but not so much that it made me throw up. Lovely Chapter, and I will be continuing to the next right now!
FrozenFortitude FrozenFortitude Feb 25, 2011
@MorganKnox you read it! :) I'm sorry for asking soooo much, but you're a kind of hero? to me I guess :P
MorganKnox MorganKnox Feb 25, 2011
Sorry that it has taken me so long to finally find the chance to read your story. It's a pretty original idea and a good intro... And remember a little gore doesn't hurt anyone ;)
FrozenFortitude FrozenFortitude Feb 25, 2011
Also, thanks for the vote! That's one goal I can check off! :]
FrozenFortitude FrozenFortitude Feb 25, 2011
@NeonSanNeonGreen @Gadzooks
                              thanks so much guys! And I will definetly try to add more descritions!