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I'm More Than What Meets The Eye

I'm More Than What Meets The Eye

639 Reads 5 Votes 5 Part Story
Allison By Weridwriter Updated Mar 14, 2011

Isabella is a complete and total band geek. Always has been, always will be. Her band friends are like a second family, except a very odd second family where she likes one of her brothers. And now her and her Band mates are going on their 8th grade trip to Yellowstone National Park, a place Isabella has gone 7 times already. But Isabella is put into a group with the boy she likes and a boy who is hell bent on going out with her. When things take a turn for the south with the boys, a myserious presence seems to be arise. When its time to choose what will Isabella choose, the person she's known for what seems her whole life, the boy who knows who she really is, or the boy who would make everything go wrong if she doesn't pick him?

Weridwriter Weridwriter Mar 01, 2011
@Carebear15  Thank you! I did think the start went a little fast too, but I didn't know what to write in that time frame it would have been way to long and as amazing as these characters are I couldn't come up with something for them to do in 13 hours! But none the less, thanks! (:
huntergirl huntergirl Mar 01, 2011
This is really really really good. I loved it, the start of it seemed alittle fast to me but hey that could just be me. So yah totaly loved it
Weridwriter Weridwriter Feb 27, 2011
@KingdomHeartsFan2100 You read my story?!? That makes me really happy! Your like one of my favorite authors on wattpad! Thank you sooooooo much for reading! 
                              <3 <3 Lily J.
dontemm dontemm Feb 25, 2011
Excessive comma use, and run-ons; things of that nature. Nothing big...
Weridwriter Weridwriter Feb 25, 2011
@detroitking Like what kind of Grammatical errors? Thanks for reading as well
                              Lily J.
dontemm dontemm Feb 23, 2011
Nice start; just a few grammatical errors but other than that, it's good :)