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Custos Unicorium 1 ~Longe Aluid--Something Very Different~

Custos Unicorium 1 ~Longe Aluid--Something Very Different~

4.5K Reads 70 Votes 20 Part Story
Tomi By Springtime_Unicorn Completed

Regina has just been chosen to be Keeper of a unicorn. There's only one problem...She can't see them! Make that two problems. She can't get out of it.

Regina's tiny village shouldn't be well known. It's about the most avarage "out in the middle of a forest" town you could come by. The thatched houses number to about 75, and there are maybe that many families. Each of which needs a hunter to survive. Nothing special. 
But the village itself is not what makes it so widely known. It's the local unicorn haven. Nearly every small, innocent, child dreams of becoming a Keeper, a person who watches the unicorns. But run by a group of monks called the Dispatchers, the unicorn haven holds more secrets than anyone in the village suspects.
As Regina gets sucked into her new job more and more secrets start coming out. A dark presence makes itself evident on the outskirts of the village. Being now a Keeper, and a tracker, one who protects the village, Regina has to keep up with it all.

ka-ka-ka-kashi ka-ka-ka-kashi May 11, 2011
LOVE UNICORNS! so i love this story :)
                              This is great! Lots of detail and it's totally original! Awesome work! Voted
shopaholic889 shopaholic889 Apr 01, 2011
I love the fantasy style!  And I love unicorns, so I'm probably going to love this story!
writer_122 writer_122 Mar 29, 2011
Good job! I really like how your story is so unique.. too many stories today are just about werewolfs and vampires, and they kind of blend after a while. 
OMFGitsJayXP OMFGitsJayXP Mar 28, 2011
                              haha :P This is my first unicorn story in like forever. 
                              The only reference to unicorns I've seen recently are the ones that explode in rainbows in Ke$ha's blow video
GenXblogger GenXblogger Mar 25, 2011
I really enjoyed this chapter, the opening was great - the idea is original and fresh!
ColorfulQuirks ColorfulQuirks Mar 20, 2011
I like it. It's a different  idea and the writing's very good.