Handstands Down The Hallway

12 Part Story 462 Reads 4 Votes
Chloe By OMSFolger Completed
When Kreea and her family move to Stettlar, everyone is skeptical. They're different, but most of all it's Kreea they aren't a fan of. Especially Johnathan. But only at first. Soon Johnathan comes to understand and like the complicating and fun-loving Kreea. And as people begin to know her, a lot of them seem to love her for who she is. But some of the parents seem to know something Johnathan doesn't, and treat her differently. Even once Johnathan understands, he wishes he didn't. Things become hard, but somehow more enjoyable than ever before.
Wow. Very short chapter. The character's personalities weren't really shown at all in this chapter but I guess this is kinda like the introduction where we learn the names and the setting. It can definitely be improved upon and maybe you could give one or two of the characters physical descriptions at least. Hope this helped :-)
Wow. Very short chapter. The character's personalities weren't really shown at all in this chapter but I guess this is kinda like the introduction where we learn the names and the setting. It can definitely be improved upon and maybe you could give one or two of the characters physical descriptions at least. Hope this helped :-)