Broken Hearted

Broken Hearted

109 Reads 2 Votes 1 Part Story
Chelsea By Oblivion17 Completed

This poem is about when a guy I loved broke my heart, and the pain I went through.

Ryuzaki_L Ryuzaki_L Mar 30, 2011
lol again i commented and reading it just now i saw a spelling error on the last sentence on the 2nd last paragraph.............OH NO I SOUND EXACTLY LIKE MY TEACHER!!!!!!! :O
Madison_Rene Madison_Rene Mar 04, 2011
I like this one!!!!! It's my favourite though I only read two so far!!(: I LOOVE IT
Oblivion17 Oblivion17 Feb 28, 2011
Yeah, they mostly express my feelings from a couple times in my past. When they guy I loved broke my heart mostly. 
Ryuzaki_L Ryuzaki_L Feb 27, 2011
wow so far your poems are really sad :(
                              but thats good cos their soo touching :D
Oblivion17 Oblivion17 Feb 24, 2011
I hope you like this. Though I need a tittle for it, so can you guys give me some ideas? thanks :)