Shelter

Shelter

1.6K Reads 39 Votes 4 Part Story
GoldenLizzie By GoldenLizzie Updated Mar 11, 2011

Five children go on a school trip to a old World War 2 bomb shelter. As they are inside their village gets bombed for real. And when they leave the bomb shelter everyone they knew and loved is dead. Their cells mutate because of the bomb radiation posioning. The rest is still being written.

Misz_Unique Misz_Unique Apr 26, 2011
Nice begining i like how yu started and your chapter is detailed =]
GoldenLizzie GoldenLizzie Mar 26, 2011
@LisaBradley Yeh yeh I can't dedicate to everyone Lisa u know that
LisaBradley LisaBradley Mar 19, 2011
(cough,cough) Bff ? what about me lizzy, dedicated to charlie not me?
GoldenLizzie GoldenLizzie Mar 09, 2011
@InMySweetDreams thanks for the critsim and yes muse is the greatet!
                              @XxA7XGirlxX  thanks for the comment
- - Mar 06, 2011
Good job. Only thing is some grammar mistakes and spelling. But other than that you have a good story going here. Voting.
GoldenLizzie GoldenLizzie Mar 06, 2011
@MaddieRobins47 Hey Cookie thanks for reading, see you at school tomorrow.