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Thorny Appreciation

Thorny Appreciation

343 Reads 15 Votes 1 Part Story
Nya A By BookBird210 Completed

Short story on someone's life. You gotta appreciate everything you've been given. :) Copyright © 2010 Nya Ahmed

BookBird210 BookBird210 Jul 10, 2013
@GNewcombe Aww thank you! :) haha, I couldn't really add to it! It just had to be short! :) Awww! Thanks, that's mean so much because I actually wrote this in year 7 so I wasn't that good to be honest! :D Thank you very very much! :)
GJNewcombe GJNewcombe Jul 10, 2013
I love this! Very well written and straight to the point :)
                              I really like how you haven't dragged it out for pages and pages because that really annoys me! Although it's only one page, the meaning is still there and I particularly love the last few lines.
                              Great job :-)
BookBird210 BookBird210 Jul 04, 2013
@Wind_97  Awww, thank you! :) That made me smile a lot :) As cheesy as it sounds, roses are actually my favourite flowers. :)
BookBird210 BookBird210 Jul 04, 2013
@JohnHolt1943 That's very true! Ahaha, thank you! Umm no it's not personal to me but thanks for the comment anyway! :)
Wind_97 Wind_97 Jul 04, 2013
Sad, but poignant and meaningful at the same time. I liked your use of roses in this story too. Keep it up!
                              ~ Wind
BookBird210 BookBird210 Jul 01, 2013
@MissAlice ahah aww thanks! Yeah, but I can't say I know what it feels like - it's just my overactive imagination talking! :) @Rose_777 Thank you so much! It's quite crap compared to my writing now but eh, I'm improving! :)