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Pen Your Pride
The wolverine-Logan's Mate.

The wolverine-Logan's Mate.

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Qurat-ul-ain Jahanzaib By manomalik666 Updated Oct 09, 2014

there is a change in plan 

my mind can't stick to one idea i don't know why but new plan is wonderful i can bet you re gonna love this

  • hugh
  • jackman
  • justwriteit
  • logan
  • wolverine
  • x-men
-nerdy -nerdy Feb 20
I don’t believe you should add some many question marks. Stop putting parentheses and what you mean, we get it. And you should really considering on making these less big. I’m not a better writing myself but this really irks me to an extent.
Everyone over here is commenting "Its adamantium." I'm like, bro, it's a story, being told from the character's view. Its logically to deduce that he thinks its iron instead of what we know it to be. Props to the author for their realism.
Destiny_Y Destiny_Y Nov 15, 2017
Adamantium can be destroyed by adamantium. In the movie wolverine after he got the adamantium skeleton Ricker made bullets out of adamantium that can kill wolverine.
-nerdy -nerdy Feb 20
Why the question mark. Maybe you could switch it up, “Thrusting his hands in his coat pockets, his cigar let out a glaze of smoke into the air. Suddenly his feet stopped as his nose smelled deeply, sneaking around as he tried to find the source of the foreign smell.” ???
-nerdy -nerdy Feb 20
After the “Hey” you could add a comma or period. Having no punctuations means you can’t capitalize a word, as you have capitalized “When”
-nerdy -nerdy Feb 20
Having random capitalized letters in your sentences and not really a [good] thing.