A Dragon Riders Element

A Dragon Riders Element

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I'M TRASH By Trash_Queen_33 Updated Nov 20

Every century years four men from across the world are chosen of the ages of 16 and 20 to be dragon riders. They are chosen to rise above the darkness that will wreak havoc and destroy anything that is kind and good in the world. However, this time is different. This generation of riders an 18-year-old girl named Alison Highlander had been chosen by a dragon. Guided by her new friends she learns forgotten secrets. Together they will stand and fight in the war between the light of life and the darkness that wishes to destroy it. Will she be strong enough?

  • dragon
  • dragons
  • fantasy
  • love
  • rider
  • romance
  • war
It looks good so far, maybe a few sentences could’ve been written differently and some Grammer is gues?
Zeroauaia Zeroauaia 2 days ago
Emphasis on huge lol that means I would get lost in it in about thirty seconds let's see *walks into the garden that Alison went into* *thirty seconds later* 
                              
                              .... Um I'm lost.....
Hawkfrost72 Hawkfrost72 Nov 19
This is the best chapter I’ve ever read in my life so far. I’ll support you on your journey of becoming the best author in the hole entire universe
Zeroauaia Zeroauaia 2 days ago
Wouldn't u capitalize the t in tech since it is part of the business name just asking
gmaddyb gmaddyb Nov 29
I would take the last sentence out, kinda breaking the fourth wall