Dance, Even When No One Is Watching

Dance, Even When No One Is Watching

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Redsoxrulemysox By Redsoxrulemysox Updated Oct 30, 2014

Vivianne doesn't have a very interesting life. She is tired of anything school related and there isn't much that makes her smile. Except for dance. She loves the feeling she gets when she moves in time to the music, twirling, spinning, twisting. But she has never danced in front of anyone before. Every week she visits her favorite place in the world, an abandoned dance studio where she can dance to her hearts content. But then she meets Carter, the owner of the not so abandoned studio and things start to get really complicated. Who is this mysterious boy and what does he want with her?

    Brodiexx Brodiexx Dec 04, 2011
    This is so great :) I love how you describe her love for dancing and music. Your writing is beautiful and I can't wait to read more! Xx
    Sun_in_your_smile Sun_in_your_smile Nov 30, 2011
    Carter! The boy is Carter! He must be! 
                                  Aww, can't wait for more!
    Sun_in_your_smile Sun_in_your_smile Nov 30, 2011
    Just plainly awesome:) I love your idea. I love music and dancing too and I always wanted to do ballet lessons. Am I strange if I like Carter? I just have a thing for cocky boys. Love his attitude~
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                                  Lil_Missy, off
    rookieriter123 rookieriter123 Aug 07, 2011
    I really like your writing. Very interesting choice in characters and love the setting too
    JaniClayson JaniClayson Mar 08, 2011
    I like the dueling points of view. I'm curious about where all this is going. Nice job!