The Return Of Bella

The Return Of Bella

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Kita Chante By mbec784 Updated May 15

Bella is stuck in Texas when she goes to forks and meet the Cullen's again but this time she is in love with jasper... Will Jasper be in love with her too?

mbec784 mbec784 Sep 18, 2015
Thank you so much for being honest. I would have done that but it is my first time writing . This is my first fan fic so the story might not be as you want it
bellawhitlock81 bellawhitlock81 Jul 05, 2015
Good chapter so far. I just wish that you went into more detail of how she was bitten and her change. Maybe more detail, as horrifying as it is, about how the "men" that abused her, and like listing her injuries in more description. Her mind state while it happened too. Otherwise excellent chapter.