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Tanner Reynolds By preppieprincess Updated May 28, 2011

These are poems I WROTE!!!!!! please tell me what u think

AprilDay AprilDay Feb 28, 2011
The emotion from this poem is good. The mixed rhyme pattern detracts and could be revised. (V1 to 3 -2&4 V5 - 1&3 V6- 2&4 V7 1&3).
preppieprincess preppieprincess Feb 26, 2011
@myrin1174  Thanks although i dont know what half of that means
myrin1174 myrin1174 Feb 25, 2011
you seem to have a good understanding on deep emotions and i think you are quite talented to to articulate it into a poem with good standards 
myrin1174 myrin1174 Feb 25, 2011
a haunting thought that brings deep emption to hearts alike a poem worth a vote
preppieprincess preppieprincess Jan 14, 2011
@xXxTwilightLuverxXx  Thanks... i wrote it as a english class assaignment originally but then i decided to edit it... and well the my friend told me about wattpad and that i could get peoples opinions on my work.... so let me know what u think of some of my othe peices