These are poems I WROTE!!!!!! please tell me what u think
The emotion from this poem is good. The mixed rhyme pattern detracts and could be revised. (V1 to 3 -2&4 V5 - 1&3 V6- 2&4 V7 1&3).
@myrin1174 Thanks although i dont know what half of that means
you seem to have a good understanding on deep emotions and i think you are quite talented to to articulate it into a poem with good standards
a haunting thought that brings deep emption to hearts alike a poem worth a vote
@xXxTwilightLuverxXx Thanks... i wrote it as a english class assaignment originally but then i decided to edit it... and well the my friend told me about wattpad and that i could get peoples opinions on my work.... so let me know what u think of some of my othe peices