The new guy

The new guy

1.4K Reads 18 Votes 8 Part Story
Tanya Cook By MissyT_C Completed

Alexis is a 17 year old girl and is starting senior year with her best friend Alice and neighbour Jayden. When the new guy starts, Alexis has a strange felling about him. What will happen?

LoveByLoving LoveByLoving Apr 02, 2011
oohhh i reallyy like it .... im gna keep reading :) 
                              
                              keep uploading !! 
                              
                              
ProfessorPlumofPlym ProfessorPlumofPlym Mar 29, 2011
Tanya, this is fab- well done. I loved the opening- it made me laugh, and it's generally very accurately punctuated. 
                              
                              Use capital I, not i! And remember that when people speak, they use contractions, eg I'll, not I will. 
                              
                              But,  basically excellent!
xoxThisIsLillsxox xoxThisIsLillsxox Mar 22, 2011
@XCrystalxGoldX loool
                              
                              
                              to be honest....i think i cld tell dat it was based on someone you noe :P
                              
                              
MissyT_C MissyT_C Mar 22, 2011
@xXxshooting_starxXx  yea shannon is also based on a girl called shannon in my school and she is proper slaggish
xoxThisIsLillsxox xoxThisIsLillsxox Mar 21, 2011
shannon sounds so slaggish
                              
                              cool characters xD
                              
                              nice way to introduce the new guy
xoxThisIsLillsxox xoxThisIsLillsxox Mar 21, 2011
this sounds awesome xD
                              
                              i completely love the bit when she grabs a sandwich to defend herself LOOL
                              
                              well if you excuse me...im gonna keep on reading ;)