The new guy

The new guy

1.4K Reads 19 Votes 8 Part Story
Tanya Cook By MissyT_C Completed

Alexis is a 17 year old girl and is starting senior year with her best friend Alice and neighbour Jayden. When the new guy starts, Alexis has a strange felling about him. What will happen?

    LoveByLoving LoveByLoving Apr 02, 2011
    oohhh i reallyy like it .... im gna keep reading :) 
                                  
                                  keep uploading !! 
                                  
                                  
    ProfessorPlumofPlym ProfessorPlumofPlym Mar 29, 2011
    Tanya, this is fab- well done. I loved the opening- it made me laugh, and it's generally very accurately punctuated. 
                                  
                                  Use capital I, not i! And remember that when people speak, they use contractions, eg I'll, not I will. 
                                  
                                  But,  basically excellent!
    xoxThisIsLillsxox xoxThisIsLillsxox Mar 22, 2011
    @XCrystalxGoldX loool
                                  
                                  
                                  to be honest....i think i cld tell dat it was based on someone you noe :P
                                  
                                  
    MissyT_C MissyT_C Mar 22, 2011
    @xXxshooting_starxXx  yea shannon is also based on a girl called shannon in my school and she is proper slaggish
    xoxThisIsLillsxox xoxThisIsLillsxox Mar 21, 2011
    shannon sounds so slaggish
                                  
                                  cool characters xD
                                  
                                  nice way to introduce the new guy
    xoxThisIsLillsxox xoxThisIsLillsxox Mar 21, 2011
    this sounds awesome xD
                                  
                                  i completely love the bit when she grabs a sandwich to defend herself LOOL
                                  
                                  well if you excuse me...im gonna keep on reading ;)