Alexis is a 17 year old girl and is starting senior year with her best friend Alice and neighbour Jayden. When the new guy starts, Alexis has a strange felling about him. What will happen?
oohhh i reallyy like it .... im gna keep reading :)
keep uploading !!
Tanya, this is fab- well done. I loved the opening- it made me laugh, and it's generally very accurately punctuated.
Use capital I, not i! And remember that when people speak, they use contractions, eg I'll, not I will.
But, basically excellent!
to be honest....i think i cld tell dat it was based on someone you noe :P
@xXxshooting_starxXx yea shannon is also based on a girl called shannon in my school and she is proper slaggish
shannon sounds so slaggish
cool characters xD
nice way to introduce the new guy
this sounds awesome xD
i completely love the bit when she grabs a sandwich to defend herself LOOL
well if you excuse me...im gonna keep on reading ;)