Jenny is pregnant, she didn't ask for it though. She was raped; a forced pregnancy. She's just fourteen. What will she do when her raper escapes from jail and comes back for their baby?
that makes no sense. if he died before you were born you wouldn't even know what your mom was like.
Omg Josh is like I'm gonna care for her, and then they'll fal, jn love XD I love it so far!! :D and omg did she get shot, or passed out or what..!?! I thought she'd get shot and it was Josh then the mother would come and she heared a voice and then that was it.. x3 CX
I love this story already but i kinda like this josh guy at the moment
By the way,
If you are going to edit this later, I would put (unedited) on the title
I've read more and now read better than before XD
Both improved!!! :D
@SMspartan Nah, I don't mind ;). You're totally right. I'm planning to edit the story once I finish it, so your advise is very helpfull :) I find it funny to read back and see how my writing has improved over time. Thanks for reading!