Can you fight the inevibility of a situation you have no control over?
@jareththegoblinking Thankyou i really loved your story too, keep it up and write more, i've put it in my library so i can keep going back to read more lol
Wow I love it please please carry on! You've drip fed us info and I just wanna know more! Thanks for checking out my story too xx
omg! it was really late at night when i wrote this, and i wen through it to check for spelling mistakes, but i must have missed some.
thankyou for picking up on them and telling me!
@trishthewriter thankyou for your comment!
i will read and comment on your work as soon as possible xx
Another good chapter. There a few spelling errors you'll want to correct so your comment board isn't littered with that suggestion. You want readers to focus on your story and not your mechanics. Voted and am moving on to read the next chapter.
Very good beginning. You've set up the scene well without giving too much away. I voted.