The It Factor

The It Factor

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Sammie By XxSwimmer_ChickxX Completed

The It Factor is a popular TV show that features young talent in their quest to become a star.  When Serenity Davis moves to Maryland, she never imagined that someday she would be featured on that show.  In fact, until she meets Kyle Jones, she would never sing a note in front of people.  But, he brings her out of her shell and even convinces her to join his band, Silent City, as their new lead singer.  Somehow, someway, she finds herself standing on the huge stage in front of The It Factor judges.  Why had she agreed to this?  A few months ago she never even sang in front of people!  One things for sure, they're in it to win it.  But can they come out on top?


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Published 6/9/12
Completed 6/6/13

Just dropped in to say that Hayley Williams is on your story cover and I love it.
Chocobumble Chocobumble Jan 04, 2014
I love this start. So confusing yet gives you enough information that you get turned away. I can't wait to tea more.
Sophia_Heart Sophia_Heart Jun 09, 2012
This is a really descriptive and engaging prologue! It does exactly what its supposed to - it draws readers in! Awesome job :) Voted.
Topazzle Topazzle Jun 04, 2012
This is great, but the first sentence is present tense and then the rest in that paragraph are past. Try to keep the same tense. I really like it!
AnDiMaRiE AnDiMaRiE Jun 03, 2012
I loved it already and will be reading the first chapter tomorrow :D Awsome work!
XxSwimmer_ChickxX XxSwimmer_ChickxX Jun 02, 2012
@sophiabelle Thank you! I'm so glad you like it enough to read more!