The It Factor is a popular TV show that features young talent in their quest to become a star.  When Serenity Davis moves to Maryland, she never imagined that someday she would be featured on that show.  In fact, until she meets Kyle Jones, she would never sing a note in front of people.  But, he brings her out of her shell and even convinces her to join his band, Silent City, as their new lead singer.  Somehow, someway, she finds herself standing on the huge stage in front of The It Factor judges.  Why had she agreed to this?  A few months ago she never even sang in front of people!  One things for sure, they're in it to win it.  But can they come out on top?
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    Published 6/9/12
    Completed 6/6/13
I love this start. So confusing yet gives you enough information that you get turned away. I can't wait to tea more.
This is a really descriptive and engaging prologue! It does exactly what its supposed to - it draws readers in! Awesome job :) Voted.
This is great, but the first sentence is present tense and then the rest in that paragraph are past. Try to keep the same tense. I really like it!
I loved it already and will be reading the first chapter tomorrow :D Awsome work!
@sophiabelle Thank you! I'm so glad you like it enough to read more!
I like this, especially the beginning. Looking forward to reading more, good job x