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Please Be Mine

Please Be Mine

3K Reads 92 Votes 8 Part Story
Don't hold your breath on it By musicluv9729 Updated Oct 29, 2011

What happens when hes your Romeo but your not his Juliet? 
Kate had liked this boy since the first time she saw him. But he had eyes for someone else.
But at the same time her new delinquent friends fall for her.
Especially one boy.

Rmsha21 Rmsha21 Apr 17, 2012
Whoa... I'm in LOVE with your casting! 
                              Ian Somerhalder and William Moseley in a same story, awesome :D
                              I like your story line, it's gripping... Your writing style is pretty impressive! and I already love Aalen! :D
xoRobinEggBlue101 xoRobinEggBlue101 Oct 31, 2011
Now you have me worried for Aalen's character, I hope he doesn't have to leave  because this situation is not his fault. :P Off to the next chapter!
poke03 poke03 May 07, 2011
and now i know how to vote
                              i voted 7 times for "please be mine".
erica_drury erica_drury Mar 11, 2011
Hey just finished this chapter I like it so far. As someone else said it could do with a little more description to help picture to characters/scene better. And the odd mistake but other than that your well on your way. Will read the rest soon. Read mine too if u have chance thanks.
SavyJParker SavyJParker Mar 07, 2011
This is pretty good. I like the way you describe stuff. Good job.
AvengedSevenfoldGirl AvengedSevenfoldGirl Mar 06, 2011
oooh, I like it a lot - can't wait to continue reading
                               there is potential here!
                              well done :)