Instability

Instability

215K Reads 15.8K Votes 38 Part Story
kelly By scifiwriter Completed

What if your greatest fear was a lie?

It's the year is 2130, and society is ruled by poverty, corruption, and surveillance. Citizens of the ISA are being taught to fear the Renegades, a group of brain-hijackers that supposedly take over the minds of innocent people. It's 17-year-old Ashley Cardry's job to interrogate the juvenile victims of the hijackings and figure out what's going on, no matter how impossible the task is. But an interrogation with the cocky, defiant, and handsome Daniel Fadhill changes that all in an instant.

Before she knows it, Ashley's world is turned into a hotbed of instability. Everywhere she looks is another danger, and only one thing is for certain: nothing is what it seems to be.

Click the "Start Reading" button to uncover the lies and mysteries of Instability.

user03578525 user03578525 2 days ago
I think spew or spout would be a better fit for this context.  Spill just sounds like he is accidentally knocking over a glass of smart ass.
user03578525 user03578525 2 days ago
I'm not sure why she thinks it's arrogant.  I'm sure she's done this before and therefore doesn't think much about it.
OMG, it's JD.. 
                              
                              ((If any1 here knows who that is and what fandom he's from ilysm))
0DD1TY 0DD1TY May 19
Can't they just do that to everyone and take over the world like what are even struggling with
Lol three people have commented *hear and I'm just rereading because I missed it.
pam5804 pam5804 May 24
This may seem like a normal reaction later, as we get to know the character and what is happening, but it seems too extreme right yet.