You Drove A Stake Through My Heart..Literally

You Drove A Stake Through My Heart..Literally

880 Reads 11 Votes 4 Part Story
Megan By megamarie121 Updated Sep 25, 2011

Clarisa is madly in love with a vampire named Carden. Little does she know, another jealous vampire, Aleron, wants her to himself. He uses his mind manipulation on Clarisa, making her stake her Carden. She swears on her on life she will kill him, if its the last thing she does. Her broken heart needs replenishing, and when a new vampire, Jaden, moves to town, he furfills that purpose. Clarisa is afraid for his life, though. What if he ends up just like Carden? Will she find hope? Read and find out.. :D

StormsComing StormsComing Apr 24, 2011
I'm really intrigued to see how this story will continue. At first it sounded like The Vampire Diaries and I just love the brothers fighting over one girl. This story is really amazing. Your little details make for a brilliant story. Pls update asap!! And keep it up :)
ColorfulQuirks ColorfulQuirks Apr 16, 2011
I love this story so far. It's not like your average vampire story. I like the dialog between Clarisa and Carden, it's very romantic and sweet. And if Clarisa won't kill Aleron, I will. ;) Anyway, amazing story, voted, and will read on for sure. Good job!
megamarie121 megamarie121 Mar 07, 2011
@spazzxstick Omg I like smiled to myself when I read this comment:) Like really, I think your the one that shouldn't  bother reading my works! Your writing is too awesome! (btw you really really need to upload a new chapter like fast)
spazzxstick spazzxstick Mar 07, 2011
Curse homework and all of its work-ness !! I really like this, your writing - Manifique !!!definitely stunning !! :)
                              
                              i think you should seriously consider being published ! I have no idea why you even bother with my writing when you have this ... ^^
                              
                              Mercedesx
StorySpinner StorySpinner Mar 01, 2011
I'm so honoured that you dedicated this chapter to me! :') Thanks a ton...It means the world to me...Oh and btw love how the story is proceeding...gotta love dangerous sexy guys like Aleron;)
StorySpinner StorySpinner Feb 21, 2011
Wow...I Like it...the fact that I'm a vampire/werewolf / any mythical creature except for zombies (Ewww they freak me out) junkie makes me like this story even more. The opening scene is touching, I would love to read more of it:) upload soon.