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The Final Summer

The Final Summer

27.4K Reads 885 Votes 24 Part Story
Danielle By holdforhope Completed

Bella has always longed for the days at her "Aunt" Susie's house in Willow's Beach. When she was younger she longed to play in the water, but now she longs to capture the heart of the one boy she has always loved. This summer, Bella is determined to find out why her lover did the things he did as a teenager, while capturing his heart at the same time. Will Bella be able to capture the heart of her true lover without breaking the heart of her close family members? This will be the final summer that Bella will fight for what she wants.

I am assuming that Susie is only Bella's mother's best friend or something...right..??
holdforhope holdforhope Sep 09, 2012
@Megabucks hah no they are not related, and im working on editing this story to make it a little bit better so i ill be sure to add spacing! I originally wrote this on wittyprofiles.com so that's why it is all weirdly spaced. Thanks for the comments :)
Megabucks Megabucks Sep 03, 2012
Aaah.  I just noticed that you put "aunt" in quotation marks.  So I'm assuming that Bella and Ryan aren't related ;)
Megabucks Megabucks Sep 03, 2012
Sounds like a lovely place to spend one's summer vacation.  Good chapter :)
Megabucks Megabucks Sep 03, 2012
Inserting spaces between paragraphs may make this a little easier to read.  Other than that a solid opening chapter to the story.  One question:  Is Ryan her first cousin?