The Cricket's Love Song

The Cricket's Love Song

72 Reads 10 Votes 1 Part Story
Haunting Angel By HauntingAngel Completed

When a young hopeful cricket seeking a mate accidentally enters a bus, life puts him to the test. Will he find true love or will he be a lost cricket?

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  • fables
  • fairytales
  • folktale
  • generalfiction
  • happyending
  • immigration
  • love
  • music
  • nature
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Sweet, joyous and a delight to read. Good work here Esther. Vtd
most_bay most_bay Mar 01
If I were you, I would try to shorten the paragraphs. Like just give some more spaces, that's all.
Yes, they are. Crickets got that guy into music, me into writing this story, and perhaps, you into reading this story. ;)
orkneyman orkneyman Apr 09
@HauntingAngel
                              
                              a lovely readable little story , consistent  storyline,  
                              
                              my favourite line is "dressed themselves in their best behaviour"  -creative and mildly humourous
kimkimswim kimkimswim Feb 14
Thank you for writing such a sweet and delightful story. I love the way you describe everything.
most_bay most_bay Mar 01
That's maybe the cricket version of kissing the back of her hand. ;)