The Diary of a Vampire Slave (Book 1)

The Diary of a Vampire Slave (Book 1)

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Kimmie Leah Jayne By KimmieLeahJayne Completed

Is it possible to live with Vampires and be there slave and be in love with one without knowing it, well yes for Kayla Ryan it is...? After her Grandmother died Kayla was brought to a huge mansion were the Dark smirking Thin Ashdon took her heart, he never told her the full facts of her being there but he did well to keep them hidden, what do you think Kayla will do when she finds out the one she loves is her Vampire master and she is his sex slave...?

Every single word she said it was like I felt her pain u are an amazing writer it the first chapter and so captivating just WOW♡♡♡♡♡♡
KenzieRaine_ KenzieRaine_ May 14, 2016
Good lord, this could be an amazing story, but the punctuation and spelling is REALLY throwing me off, I was thinking maybe you were young, but you wrote 'fûck' so..
chocolate_is_bae_ chocolate_is_bae_ Apr 25, 2016
Hello there u grandma needs ya.we dont care how he looks plus lad really?
alskdjhgqp alskdjhgqp Aug 06, 2016
Why do sooooo many sentences end like this............! ??????????
AnnaMeowMeow AnnaMeowMeow Jul 30, 2016
Well atleast she's not like "I'm so ugly. Like I have pale perfect skin, straight silky hair, brown eyes, etc etc"
Miathebrave4 Miathebrave4 Dec 13, 2015
Yea I would've just shoved his shoulder and move right pass him! And ways with all the exlamation marks because they r not needed and when someone new speaks then its good to Give them their own lil space