How I Didn't Get The Romantic Movie Ending

How I Didn't Get The Romantic Movie Ending

5 Part Story 13.1K Reads 596 Votes
Julia Pearl Meg By juliapearlmeg Completed

This is your classic boy meets girl story. Vincent is sitting at a coffee shop, reading a book. All of a sudden, Harper walks in, dripping wet from the pouring rain. He offers his handkerchief to her, not knowing that it will be the start of their love story. Vince does all the romantic things, like in the movies. But, as said in the title, he doesn't get the ending he expects.

Hahahaha this is so adorably cute :D
                                    But the stars aren't really necessary unless there is huge gap between the scenes
aww ahaha cute meet up... i imagined Vince stuttering hahaha so adorable >.<
MickeyPhelps MickeyPhelps Oct 31, 2012 10:10AM
Very cute! Vince was so adorable when he started stuttering :P Anyway, great start! Can't wait to see what else is in store. Keep up the amazing work! :)
hopenlight hopenlight Oct 31, 2012 05:35AM
Hey I think this is super cute! I like Vince already, he sounds like a guy I would like to get to know. And I like the title, it caught my attention.
aintazombie aintazombie Oct 30, 2012 06:54AM
Hmm... To be honest, I think this kind of story is too mainstream. Still, the beginning was flawless, really neat writing. Well, going on to the next one. Maybe this would turn out interesting.
Klaira Klaira Oct 21, 2012 02:44AM
This is so so good, darling, kept my attention which is hard with my adhd, though few mistakes, makes a stellar book <3 keep writing ^.^ <3 dont forget to check out my two books, much appreciation and love. x