How I Didn't Get The Romantic Movie Ending

5 Part Story 12.8K Reads 582 Votes
Julia Pearl Meg By juliapearlmeg Completed
This is your classic boy meets girl story. Vincent is sitting at a coffee shop, reading a book. All of a sudden, Harper walks in, dripping wet from the pouring rain. He offers his handkerchief to her, not knowing that it will be the start of their love story. Vince does all the romantic things, like in the movies. But, as said in the title, he doesn't get the ending he expects.
I feel like the title gives away the story. I'm not saying it's not a good thing, but it would certainly be better if it were something else. Anyway, I love the nervousness of Vincent, it's cute and it seems natural. A pretty girl can often make a guy nervous, so that's a great thing.
                                     This chapter is short, but oddly enough I want to keep on reading. Maybe a tad bit more detail, but I like the story nonetheless. I'm voting and reading on, cheers!
I feel like the title gives away the story. I'm not saying it's not a good thing, but it would certainly be better if it were something else. Anyway, I love the nervousness of Vincent, it's cute and it seems natural. A pretty girl can often make a guy nervous, so that's a great thing.
                                     This chapter is short, but oddly enough I want to keep on reading. Maybe a tad bit more detail, but I like the story nonetheless. I'm voting and reading on, cheers!
I feel like the title gives away the story. I'm not saying it's not a good thing, but it would certainly be better if it were something else. Anyway, I love the nervousness of Vincent, it's cute and it seems natural. A pretty girl can often make a guy nervous, so that's a great thing.
                                     This chapter is short, but oddly enough I want to keep on reading. Maybe a tad bit more detail, but I like the story nonetheless. I'm voting and reading on, cheers!
I feel like the title gives away the story. I'm not saying it's not a good thing, but it would certainly be better if it were something else. Anyway, I love the nervousness of Vincent, it's cute and it seems natural. A pretty girl can often make a guy nervous, so that's a great thing.
                                     This chapter is short, but oddly enough I want to keep on reading. Maybe a tad bit more detail, but I like the story nonetheless. I'm voting and reading on, cheers!
I feel like the title gives away the story. I'm not saying it's not a good thing, but it would certainly be better if it were something else. Anyway, I love the nervousness of Vincent, it's cute and it seems natural. A pretty girl can often make a guy nervous, so that's a great thing.
                                     This chapter is short, but oddly enough I want to keep on reading. Maybe a tad bit more detail, but I like the story nonetheless. I'm voting and reading on, cheers!
I feel like the title gives away the story. I'm not saying it's not a good thing, but it would certainly be better if it were something else. Anyway, I love the nervousness of Vincent, it's cute and it seems natural. A pretty girl can often make a guy nervous, so that's a great thing.
                                     This chapter is short, but oddly enough I want to keep on reading. Maybe a tad bit more detail, but I like the story nonetheless. I'm voting and reading on, cheers!