Secret Lovers

Secret Lovers

3K Reads 35 Votes 11 Part Story
Me By swimergirl35 Updated Mar 13, 2011

Juliana spent a night with Dominic but didn't know he was her new teacher. Now they must find a way to be together but not caught. Will this ruin their relationship or make it stronger?

thelionftw thelionftw Mar 10, 2011
It's a good start, but everything goes too fast. And the transitions are a little bit rusty. There's also grammar mistakes. Other than that, it sounds like an interesting story. I'll keep on reading(:
princesslulu princesslulu Feb 21, 2011
Awesome since I am the only one who knows bout this so far I am the frst to read, vote, and comment lol I love me from you lol