hands tied-Discontinued

hands tied-Discontinued

2.8K Reads 39 Votes 11 Part Story
i_sell_seashells By i_sell_seashells Updated Oct 15, 2011

LiIith, Iris, and DanieIIe are the best of friends.  Nothing can separate them.  UntiI they're kidnapped and forced to make a decision, They have to choose Who wiII die?

Trio's hands are tied, in more ways than one.

LaineyJade LaineyJade Apr 20, 2011
great story. pretty realistic soccer match, too. i like the details and looooove the prologue =)
bakane bakane Apr 20, 2011
All together the story flowed very much~ It was interesting and good. voted!
Ubiquitous-Kiss Ubiquitous-Kiss Mar 28, 2011
I only saw a couple typos.  Also, I didn't find the POV to be confusing, but I'm used to reading things that switch POV's often.  
                              
                              I think this is an interesting start.  I'm going to read the next chapter soon.
i_sell_seashells i_sell_seashells Mar 27, 2011
@applechomper 
                              
                              thank you soo much for the feedback I'll work on the POV thing