LiIith, Iris, and DanieIIe are the best of friends. Nothing can separate them. UntiI they're kidnapped and forced to make a decision, They have to choose Who wiII die?
Trio's hands are tied, in more ways than one.
great story. pretty realistic soccer match, too. i like the details and looooove the prologue =)
All together the story flowed very much~ It was interesting and good. voted!
I only saw a couple typos. Also, I didn't find the POV to be confusing, but I'm used to reading things that switch POV's often.
I think this is an interesting start. I'm going to read the next chapter soon.
thank you soo much for the feedback I'll work on the POV thing