Teenage Desires

Teenage Desires

90.8K Reads 755 Votes 20 Part Story
Sarah Louise Lawrence By saaaar-x Completed

Ava Hayes is a normal teenage girl. Her life is pretty boring, she's stuck in the same routine everyday. She soon finds herself wanting to escape that. Then she meets the perfect guy. Riley Murray is the cute and loyal boyfriend that she needs. Will their romance last or will they have some bumps along the way? Drama only makes you stronger as a couple... right?

ChloeBarwick ChloeBarwick Oct 28, 2014
This is a really great story line. Could everyone please read my book 'Rose Hathaway is my trainer' if you get time. Thanks
Awesomely_Evil Awesomely_Evil Aug 12, 2013
The opening bugged me because it was the cliché alarm clock thing. It improved as it went along and lost the cliché vibe. All though Ava had a voice a lot like most girls in teen fictions. I wasn't hooked from this first chapter but I think it may get better if I read on.
WelshReader WelshReader Apr 20, 2012
Seems like Ava is that typical high school girl... always clumsy and late.. Riley seems like a gentleman :') keep writing! <3
- - Apr 20, 2012
I really liked this. I thought it was cute, and very well written.
dreamermuchs22 dreamermuchs22 Apr 20, 2012
The descriptions are the best part of the story. I like the way you depicts each of the characters and such. Imho, Ava is not unique enough, but I'm hoping that this will be different in later chapters.
JynxBabe JynxBabe Dec 03, 2011
This is cute! I noticed some typos and spelling errors but nothing that can't be fixed! Good Job!!