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Pen Your Pride


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Thegirlwriter By melissarenteria1 Updated Jun 07

A dark haunting past comes back to haunt Abby Crothers 
Abby tries to forget her past lover
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  • chicklit
  • depression
  • emotional
  • emotionalrollercoaster
  • girl
  • heartbreak
  • hurt-comfort
  • love
  • mystery-thriller
  • sad
  • sadstory
  • scary
  • suspense
  • thriller
  • tragicromance
  • trust
Your writing style is a little confusing, but I love the detail!
Caz-Latina Caz-Latina Mar 03
Interesting writing’s like a movie script without stage directions. I’d try to use capital letters a bit more though to break up the sentences and improve the flow a bit.
-jolyne- -jolyne- Mar 12
beautiful and powerful first chapter ♥️ love the imagery and details
Raven-Truth Raven-Truth Apr 24
Otherwise I love the chp it’s quite a strong starting and well formed
Raven-Truth Raven-Truth Apr 24
Oh I actually thought they broke up or something it this was totally unexpected
ashley5967 ashley5967 7 days ago
I think she needs to take a break from listening to Paul he makes her go through so many emotions