welcome to duck ville high

welcome to duck ville high

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Bigmac_Bammmm By Bigmac_Bammmm Updated Apr 03, 2013

This is about a girl named Vans falling in love with the most popular guy at her school who just so happens to be the younger brother of Micheal and Spence, who just so happen to be best friends with Vans' brothers. They didn't know each other because before grade 9 Vans lived with her Mom where as now she lives with her dad

Bigmac_Bammmm Bigmac_Bammmm Apr 04, 2013
Can I just point out that I wrote this when I was like 13. Also when I said that I would continue this story I would go back fix up the things I messed up. But thank you for the pointers... And just a question if you don't like the way it's written why waist your time commenting??
DracoNako DracoNako Apr 03, 2013
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                              My... god... Your spelling is atrocious, just to start with. The summary sucks.
                              The first paragraph ALONE makes me want to cry. Seriously, look over this story.. PLEASE.