From Happiness to Pain

From Happiness to Pain

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Rachael McDonald By RachaelMcDonald8 Updated Feb 28

Rachael McDonald has been living a fun adventurous life. Once October rolled around, she started to go through pain for three months. She went to multiple hospitals so she can find out why she's having severe pain, then one day, she finds out what was causing it.

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The descriptive detail and plot in this chapter is wonderful! excited to read on! 
                              (cm.1)@LBoddez
HanaSTaylor HanaSTaylor Jun 14
I love the detail of your plot and in the setting ❤️ great atmosphere ! Really good chapter (2 @LBoddez)
I love the characters you have developed in your story! Can't wait to read more about their journey! (@LBoddez 1)
LBoddez LBoddez Mar 07
Yikes! What a lot of pain your main character has to go through. You've done a great job illustrating the journey - the way the pain had begun. Nice job.
I really like your book so far! It seems you have a great story to tell, I look forward to seeing you further develop these characters:) (1 @LBoddez)
TylerCastel TylerCastel Apr 06
I love the depth! The atmosphere is really immersive (2 @LBoddez)