Don't die on me...

Don't die on me...

5 Part Story 3.8K Reads 147 Votes
Sima H By ItsSima Updated Mar 04, 2011

Angela's world crashes down when her mother became ill, she's never been so lost and alone in her life. But then Lucas - who is doing his Community Service in their house – decides to help her through the hard time. Angela let him through her walls and prays for her mother not to die on her. However she’s too busy to wonder why Lucas is really helping her and what he’s planning to do …

ItsSima ItsSima Apr 04, 2011 07:12PM
@randomgiiirrl thank you :D aww guys , you are making my day !
ItsSima ItsSima Apr 04, 2011 07:12PM
@MagicPineapples that's what i aimed for =) good to know you guys like it
ItsSima ItsSima Apr 04, 2011 07:11PM
@AlyceInNeverland well it explained what i went through so i understand the feeling .. =)
Oooh, cool start. Short. Simple.Poetic.  Nice description, too. Looking forward to reading the rest.
ItsSima ItsSima Mar 07, 2011 04:24PM
@OXLexyRaeXO Thank you, that's kind of what i wanted and i noticed that not many people have done that so. ... 
FlowerofHope FlowerofHope Feb 27, 2011 09:42PM
I like it, its really good and I can imagine everything *VOTED*
                              
                                                                                    -FlowerofHope-