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I liked this I hope it will be like Crash and glass the books that are basically poetry! Itd be a really original Idea then! This was beautiful and what I like to call wordplay
I like it, gENERALLY I LIKE ALL RHYMING POEMS, KEEP IT UP :)
i just got interested by the introduction, and now this poem!! your very talented in writing WOW <3
I have to agree with the others, your idea of starting your novel with a poem worked, coz you don't see a story starting with a poem everyday. This was unique, and BOY!!, your good in writing them. keep it up
I am not an expert when it comes to poems. But I think this first part of the story set the mood of the novel. Very interesting. This is the first time I read a prologue in this form, and I think it worked its wonder. It's haunting and good.
Poem as a prologue...I liked this idea more than ever! Are you a poet or a writer? The poem was so dark and seductive, intriguing really. Excellent work!