Under intensive revision. Ignore this work for the mean time.
I liked this I hope it will be like Crash and glass the books that are basically poetry! Itd be a really original Idea then! This was beautiful and what I like to call wordplay
@EternalFaerytale @narnoura @flogfuntkickmaguirre @Kwassa Thank you for your comments! :DDD
I like it, gENERALLY I LIKE ALL RHYMING POEMS, KEEP IT UP :)
@MusicMyLife I write both stories and poems, actually. :) Though I find poems to be much easier to write, since it's shorter of course. xD
@ANNEnonymous @OllyPop_ @IDareYouToMove Thank you for your comments! Really appreciate it! :D
i just got interested by the introduction, and now this poem!! your very talented in writing WOW <3
I have to agree with the others, your idea of starting your novel with a poem worked, coz you don't see a story starting with a poem everyday. This was unique, and BOY!!, your good in writing them. keep it up