Neverest

Neverest

2.3K Reads 320 Votes 29 Part Story
T.L. Bodine By TLBodine Completed

One year ago, Sean Miller -- journalist and mountain climbing enthusiast -- reached the summit of Mt. Everest, and was never seen again. Unable to move on without knowing the truth of what happened, his wife Carrie flies to Nepal and hires a guide, demanding to be taken up the mountain to search for Sean's body. Guided by a travel journal left behind from her husband's expedition, Carrie ventures into the frozen, open-air graveyard of the world's tallest peak. It soon becomes clear that there are ancient and terrible forces at work on the mountain...and the dead do not rest easy at the summit.

  • action
  • adventure
  • creepy
  • dark
  • death
  • everest
  • fiction
  • ghost
  • horror
  • monster
  • mystery
  • paranormal
  • scary
  • spooky
  • survival
  • thriller
  • wattys2018
  • yeti
RealLDNash RealLDNash Jun 08
Wow, this is some of the best written material I've read on wattpad. Your chapter started a little wobbly with typos, overrunning paragraphs and some instances that need tightening, but overall, this is incredible. 
                              
                              I can't wait to read more.
I really like this paragraph and how you paced it. Great characterization so far, too!
Great beginning! That slow but sudden unforseen death revelation got me. Definitely reading more!
hally678 hally678 Aug 07
You capture her fear of flying beautifully. Also the  way your sentences are constructed are unique and impressive.