Make Her Mine

Make Her Mine

1.6K Reads 25 Votes 2 Part Story
TNR By TabithaTragedy Updated Feb 21, 2011

Charlotte Carmichael is the girl of Jeremy Lane's dreams, and he is determined to make her his after being in love with her for five years. He made a New Year's resolution at the beginning of 2011 to make her his by the end of the year. But can he do it? 
This is the story of how Jeremy finds that promising to make Charlotte his is only the beginning...

MoniqueTheRippah MoniqueTheRippah Feb 23, 2011
Really nice start to a book!
                              I like how you gave a little info on Charlotte; tht some people think she's crazy but he thinks shes amazing :)
                              Good job!
PollardWharly PollardWharly Feb 22, 2011
You're writing is very strong, and I like the story set-up. The only thing is you dont seem to write very much. Like there's only two pages of this and another only had one page. I want to see more from you! You're good enough for it! Keep writing :)