The old Oak Wardrobe holds a secret...
Even thought the book was short I loved the plot and storyline
@Giraffe16 I'm sorry but i dont think so! Haha Narnia! Yeah i guess i can see where you are coming from :)
@alypenguin Yes! I thought at first this would be like narnia and I wa like oh no! But it like completely blew my idea off! It was truly amazing and I still think u write bettah!:)
Omg! He killed her!! Omg Omg. You write wayyyyyyy bettah than me!!!!:)
@Bwriter thanks for the advice, it really helps me become a better writer :)
Good, but the story is far too fast paced, you need to add more details in between the events of what happened here should at least two pages. Your plot-line however is good and you have potential just work on those details and you'll be great.