The Wardrobe

The Wardrobe

188 Reads 6 Votes 1 Part Story
alypenguin By alypenguin Completed

The old Oak Wardrobe holds a secret...

chrissycr7 chrissycr7 Aug 23, 2015
Even thought the book was short I loved the plot and storyline
alypenguin alypenguin Feb 27, 2011
@Giraffe16 I'm sorry but i dont think so! Haha Narnia! Yeah i guess i can see where you are coming from :)
bellefleur16 bellefleur16 Feb 26, 2011
@alypenguin Yes! I thought at first this would be like narnia and I wa like oh no! But it like completely blew my idea off! It was truly amazing and I still think u write bettah!:)
bellefleur16 bellefleur16 Feb 26, 2011
Omg! He killed her!! Omg Omg. You write wayyyyyyy bettah than me!!!!:)
alypenguin alypenguin Feb 25, 2011
@Bwriter  thanks for the advice, it really helps me become a better writer :)
Bwriter Bwriter Feb 21, 2011
Good, but the story is far too fast paced, you need to add more details in between the events of what happened here should at least two pages. Your plot-line however is good and you have potential just work on those details and you'll be great.