REVENGE

REVENGE

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Farabe Khan Alif By alifplanet700 Updated Feb 27

There's a boy named Alan. He had a photographic memory and from a lower middle class family. He was living a quite satisfactory life, then suddenly a mass incident happened which change his world.......stay tune for Alan.

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4FR_alone 4FR_alone Feb 11
I feel like that twist is introduced too early. Maybe make a transition scene instead of moving straight from that good news to the murder.