Elysium

Elysium

202 Reads 27 Votes 8 Part Story
Ryan By TheFirstLastborn Updated Mar 27

Nier, the Last Promethian, finds himself in a struggle after his race gets wiped out by the Automata, a faction of cyborgs looking the sweep the galaxy of all competition and take the Promethians' place as ruler of the galaxy.
   With his race wiped out, will Nier be able to survive on his own? Find out today by reading Elysium, an original story written by Ryan, who gained inspiration by Klayton, also known by Celldweller.

  • distant
  • future
  • futuristic
  • galaxy
  • sci-fi
  • space
Red_Leasia Red_Leasia Feb 12
When you say sad here, do you mean pathetic? Like he's whining? Or sad as in he is upset?
Red_Leasia Red_Leasia Feb 12
Desert of the Fallen XD
                              Reminded me of the Dead Marshes from LOTR.
Red_Leasia Red_Leasia Feb 12
"Noted, and we did not kill you* because we want you to join us," the "unknown person" says..."  Tried rewording it a little, kind of sounds awkward, plus you can combine the sentence into one for better flow.
Red_Leasia Red_Leasia Feb 12
Ok, definitely want a description of this guy.
                              ...and his cybernetic metal tie. lol
Red_Leasia Red_Leasia Feb 12
I would add in a few details here or there, ie, No one responded to my queries, as they moved me further into the dark.
Red_Leasia Red_Leasia Feb 12
Between here and the next paragraph is good spot to give a description of both speakers, groups, whoever is there.