Somber Thoughts [Poetry of Morbidity]

Somber Thoughts [Poetry of Morbidity]

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LuckOfTheApocalypse By LuckOfTheApocalypse Updated Feb 21, 2011 08:36AM

Poems with morbid themes and dark thoughts.

WOW! That was really good!! You might wanna make some spaces in between the sentences or split them up into stanzas- just a suggestion:)
@nicollettenikki Thank you so much. I simply love thinking of it as lyrical, you put my pieces into perspectives that truly make me appreciate you =]
This was wow I loved the way you rhymed everything towards the ending it made this seem all the more lyrical. Once again another thoughtful and mind-bending piece on everything. This was brilliance in its own right. 
@CalebPaul Thank you very much. I truly appreciate the read and comment.
CalebPaul CalebPaul Feb 25, 2011 07:05AM
Every line has its complete and utter importance, excellent imagery
@Kizz15 It is no trouble at all.  Thank you for reading and commenting, I appreciate the feedback.