Somber Thoughts [Poetry of Morbidity]

Somber Thoughts [Poetry of Morbidity]

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LuckOfTheApocalypse By LuckOfTheApocalypse Updated Feb 21, 2011

Poems with morbid themes and dark thoughts.

WOW! That was really good!! You might wanna make some spaces in between the sentences or split them up into stanzas- just a suggestion:)
@nicollettenikki Thank you so much. I simply love thinking of it as lyrical, you put my pieces into perspectives that truly make me appreciate you =]
This was wow I loved the way you rhymed everything towards the ending it made this seem all the more lyrical. Once again another thoughtful and mind-bending piece on everything. This was brilliance in its own right. 
@CalebPaul Thank you very much. I truly appreciate the read and comment.
CalebPaul CalebPaul Feb 25, 2011 07:05AM
Every line has its complete and utter importance, excellent imagery
@Kizz15 It is no trouble at all.  Thank you for reading and commenting, I appreciate the feedback.