Broken

Broken

974 Reads 19 Votes 12 Part Story
Jessabell By Jessabell Updated Apr 07, 2012

Faith Compton is looking forward to a new start. Having a past like hers anything has to be better. Moving to a new state and a new school sounds like a great idea but her past will haunt her more now than it ever has. Keeping her history a secreat becomes more of a challenge than expected. Can she find happiness, or at leat some where inbetween, or will she be broken forever?

Jessabell Jessabell Mar 10, 2011
@ToastyCareBear
                              Thanks so much for reading and commenting! :) the who matter madder issue has been noted for the future :)
ToastyCareBear ToastyCareBear Mar 10, 2011
"fun no madder..." is actually "fun no matter" and I noticed a few other mistakes but I like the general writing style.
Jessabell Jessabell Feb 22, 2011
Hey guys I noticed I'm getting more reads on the first part than the second... If you don't mind keep reading a few more parts before you decide you don't like it (I'm working on part 3 now
Jessabell Jessabell Feb 21, 2011
Hey guys let me know if you like it... Where I need improvement... And how you think it's progressing. Thanks! :)
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                                        - Jessabell
Jessabell Jessabell Feb 21, 2011
Kk guys this is my first upload let me know how you like it...