a true family

a true family

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missvelvet09 By missvelvet09 Updated Feb 20, 2011

Mya jhonson the typical 13 year old nerd who falls for the popular guy and is rejected now a laughing stock of the school mya has so many problems and can't even turn for help at home since her mom had died and her dad drank all the time and was always abusing mya. Mya feels there is no hope in her life until she dicover a pack of werewolfs in the forest she finally feels she has the chance to have a true family, and a possible true love

SillyLittleGirl SillyLittleGirl Feb 20, 2011
There are a lot of errors, grammatical and spelling ones. Punctuation is running on an all-time low here, but if you wrote it well and edited it... I think it would be an interesting story.
                              
                              Just fix it all up. There are so many mistakes, I stopped counting. Sorry to be blunt.