Mind of Gray

Mind of Gray

3K Reads 80 Votes 4 Part Story
Blake By Bwriter Updated Feb 23, 2011

Nothing is ever as it seems. The truth lies just around every corner, tucked away and hidden out of grasp, for the truth does not always want to be remembered. Those who hide it and those who protect it wish to submerge themselves in a blissful ignorance. Locking the door and opening the mind of all to gray.

TabithaTragedy TabithaTragedy Mar 07, 2011
It was very, very descriptive. I'm not much of a Sci-Fi reader, so maybe it's supposed to be, but I just couldn't sort through everything very well. I'll read on to see if it gets more action-y though. But you do have near perfect spelling and grammar, so good job. =)
TRUE_GUCCI TRUE_GUCCI Feb 26, 2011
i feel like i'm watching marcus when reading this, it's really good. :)
143Tobi 143Tobi Feb 25, 2011
Your description is incredible. You really give the reader a clear idea of what is going on. This is really good, i like it! :)
Ryan14629 Ryan14629 Feb 25, 2011
You use a lot of great description. You can really paint a picture!
thetis27 thetis27 Feb 23, 2011
Um, I love how it was very graphic on your descriptions; i find your chapter might be a little short? but it got me to read more though! 
Bwriter Bwriter Feb 23, 2011
@LeluesNotebook Thank you for the suggestions, please continue to read on and tell me what you think I really start to dive into his emotions.