The Immortal Pool

The Immortal Pool

1.8K Reads 73 Votes 5 Part Story
Beast By beastlychild Updated Jul 11, 2011

Calista Orchard, a 14-year-old orphan, with no recollection of parents, runs away from her foster home.  Again.  When running, she is mugged by two people- but they turn out not being people at all!  They're The Fallen, and they want to suck her blood.  But before they succeed, she is saved by a winged boy, and taken to a place where magic isn't unheard of.   The Haven is a  safe house for people with unusual abilities, and it's the eighth in the world.  There, Calista meets the mysterious Edge, who she knows nothing about, the good-natured Marlowe, unless you're Damien Parker, a young werewolf boy, and Simon, who can read minds.  She is taught how to use her newfound powers by The B, a woman with nearly no emotions, and is happy, for once.  But, there is a threat attacking The Haven, and soon the world, and Calista is in the middle of it.

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This story is amazing so far. You did have one or two grammatical issues (You used 'you're' once instead of 'your') but I need to read more.
Phloerentina Phloerentina Jun 28, 2012
OMG! It's heavenly awesome!!! The words and the descriptions are great. I can even imagine the scene :D VOTE !!! 
                              Oh yes, please help me on my writtings (I'm new but I'm so noisy, eh) Venomous Immortality. But If it is okay for you of course :) Gonna go read the next chapter of yours :))
beastlychild beastlychild Jul 28, 2011
@veritaserum Thank you for the input!  I'll try to be more descriptive in my later chapters!
beastlychild beastlychild Jul 20, 2011
@blingey123 Really?!  Ah!  You read my story!  That maakes me feel so happy! Thank you!  *freaks out*  
                              It means the world to me when people read my story!  Thank you!
                              ~beast~
beastlychild beastlychild Jul 04, 2011
@TonyLuvs2Read   It's not actually a vampire story.  There are vampires, and it is part of the plot, but besides this chapter, the characters have no interaction to the vampires whatsoever and thank you so much for the comment! :D 
                              
strawberrycrush strawberrycrush Jul 01, 2011
Ok people, before I read this, just GOTTA say, look at this book cover makeover!!!! It's brilliant, beast!!!! :O Ah-MAZING!
                              I better quickly shut up cos I just need to read your new chapters!!!
                              strawberrycrush xx XD